Overwrought with darkness

metallica’s wish

to reveal the phantom coach

saves a florid soul

it’s secret powers

strengthens those who struggle with

societal woes



Christine’s Daily Writing Prompt: The Phantom Coach – Amelia Edwards

Your Daily Word Prompt – Florid – October 7, 2019

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  5 comments for “Overwrought with darkness

  1. 10/07/2019 at 3:44 PM

    Nicely done! 😀

    • 10/07/2019 at 5:06 PM

      Thank you! 😉

  2. 10/09/2019 at 10:23 AM

    You had me at Metallica! 😀 (Even though you’re not talking about the band.) Another excellent poem! 👌 And, I love your blog redesign.

  3. 10/10/2019 at 12:51 PM

    You have captured the edginess of this piece perfectly in your words. I always love it when I see you have written something for name that vase! Pure magic 😉 Makes my day! I am currently working on a book project, and if you are amenable, I would love to include one of your poems in it, if you give me permission. I will obviously credit your work to you and include your website!

    • 10/10/2019 at 3:44 PM

      Thank you! And you are certainly welcome to use one of my poems in your book! 🤗

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