
the air itself paused
sounds of sirens menacing
stories told nervous
VJ’s Weekly Challenge #100: Pause
Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge: Tuesday, June 16, 2020
-Eugenia
featured image – Pexels
bemused razzle-dazzle
the air itself paused
sounds of sirens menacing
stories told nervous
VJ’s Weekly Challenge #100: Pause
Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge: Tuesday, June 16, 2020
-Eugenia
featured image – Pexels
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This really captures the aura of the moment. In fact, just moments before opening this, an ambulance drove through our quite neighbourhood – the “air ..,paused”. Well done!
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Thank you! I hear them everyday where we live. Our neighborhood is close to a major highway.
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Welcome. It’s worrisome here as we are a community of seniors, and the sight of an ambulance means one of neighbour’s is unwell. Even worse in this time.
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That would be worrisome. Sirens have always been a sign of something gone wrong to me.
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Definitely.
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Touching poem Eugenia.
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Thank you, Sadje! 😉
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You’re welcome 😉
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owl on the book marker
wise
in three~
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Sirens, always worrisome. Toughing words.
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Yes, they are worrisome. Thanks!
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It’s ‘Touching’
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You hit the hammer on the nail with this purrfect haiku, Eugi. Love the picture too😺Pawkisses for a Happy Day🐾😽💞
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Thank you! 🌻 🌞😺❤️
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Eugenia,
The air itself paused really grabbed me, almost sending a shiver down my spine. To feel as if the air pauses has to be an intense moment. Excellent job, my friend!
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Thank you, Kritika! 😉
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Ahhh so many emotions are coming out…out of this short yet thought provoking piece
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Very evocative…❤
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome
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Wonderful!
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Thank you!
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Reminds me of camping trips, hanging around the fire, and telling ghost stories. 🙂
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Yeah! 👻
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