Unhurried

52 thoughts on “Unhurried”

1. How wonderful!

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   1. Thank you so much!

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      1. You are so welcome.

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2. Love the calmness of your poem.

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   1. Thank you, Sadje!

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      1. You’re always welcome my friend

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3. I like the twist in the final line.

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   1. Thank you, Steven.

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4. One word comment: BEAUTIFUL!

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   1. Thank you so much, Joseph! 😊

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5. Good use of the prompts! 🙂

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   1. Thank you, Deborah. 😉

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6. How you convey such peace, tranquility, stillness and quiet in just 15 words is absolutely beyond me. Thank you.

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   1. Thank you for your very kind comment, Joseph!

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7. Now here’s a pace that leaves room for breathing and being.

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   1. Yes! Sometimes a blessing.

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8. Riffing Eugenia’s “Unhurried”

   Weighted portions, coming and going in stride;
   epiphanies emerge, in their own time and space.
   Depictions appear, to surge, then run and hide;
   parody, parity append, as if they own the place.

   Michael Todd (2020)

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   1. and the entitled
      mingled worlds lacking passion
      history has no guilt

      Thank you for your splendid riff, Michael! 😘

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9. On the prompt about caution:

   I ran towards the slippery when wet floor
   I expected to fly without wings
   and swim on the floor.
   @feddiesharkhy

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   1. my instinctive self
      shuns what leaves a bitter taste
      my pace heeds caution

      Thank you for your fascinating input! 😊

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10. On the prompt about caution:

    I ran towards the slippery when wet floor
    I expected to fly without wings
    and swim on the floor.
    @feddiesharkhy

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    1. my instinctive self
       shuns what leaves a bitter taste
       my pace heeds caution

       Thank you for your fascinating input! 😊

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11. On the prompt about caution:

    I ran towards the slippery when wet floor
    I expected to fly without wings
    and swim on the floor.
    @feddiesharkhy

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    1. my instinctive self
       shuns what leaves a bitter taste
       my pace heeds caution

       Thank you for your fascinating input! 😊

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12. WOW-good, especially “thoughts yawn”, as well as “pace heeds”. Really good, Eugenia.

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    1. Thank you, Rhen! 😊

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13. WOW-good, especially “thoughts yawn”, as well as “pace heeds”. Really good, Eugenia.

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14. WOW-good, especially “thoughts yawn”, as well as “pace heeds”. Really good, Eugenia.

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    1. Thank you, Rhen! 😊

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       1. You’re most welcome 🙂

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15. Any time I need some peace in my life, I find I just need to read your work

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    1. What a lovely comment. Thank you KaylaAnn! ❤️

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16. Any time I need some peace in my life, I find I just need to read your work

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    1. What a lovely comment. Thank you KaylaAnn! ❤️

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17. Any time I need some peace in my life, I find I just need to read your work

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    1. What a lovely comment. Thank you KaylaAnn! ❤️

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18. the power of the moon

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    1. Yes, and it makes me swoon. 😉

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