Eugi's Causerie II

Poetry is a state of mind

The fortress

inside the grey walls

gelid breath whispers secrets

gift of life long lost

last farewells lonely

What do you see # 38 – 13 July 2020


14 responses to “The fortress

  1. Sadje 07/13/2020 at 5:51 pm

    This is so evocative Eugenia. I felt his loneliness.
    Thanks for joining in the challenge.

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  2. Rhen Laird 07/13/2020 at 9:15 pm

    Oh WOW, 4 lines both powerful and beautiful.

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  4. judeitakali 07/17/2020 at 5:47 am

    Ooh this is so nice Eugi. Beautiful writing

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  5. Jules 07/19/2020 at 8:15 am

    I think that is quite how some elders feel when every day it seems one of their own generation passed…
    Still thankful for their younger family… but the life of their youth long gone.

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