Off track

it wasn’t the unwillful

longing but the roar

of my thoughts.

with the speed of

a freight train,

they derailed my


the memories, they


daunting and

unconscious emotion.

It was nine years

ago, I remember

clearly I could

smell the rain

VJ’s Weekly Challenge #110 – smell

Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge: freight train, longing, and nine – Tuesday, August 25, 2020


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  12 comments for “Off track

  1. 08/25/2020 at 4:53 pm

    Love this one, Eugi. Forceful…and the ending just highlights the ambiance.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. 08/25/2020 at 4:55 pm

    I agree with V.J! She took the words right out of my mouth! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  3. 08/25/2020 at 8:55 pm

    A vivid recollection!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. 08/26/2020 at 3:54 pm

    Reblogged this on Fae Corps Inc.


  5. 09/02/2020 at 8:45 am

    Wow! So vividly described, Eugi. ❤ The roar of thoughts have such immense power to transport us into another time. Perfect gif to meditate on. I’d love that for my computer screen shot.

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