Off track

it wasn’t the unwillful

longing but the roar

of my thoughts.

with the speed of

a freight train,

they derailed my

subconscious.

the memories, they

resurfaced,

daunting and

unconscious emotion.

It was nine years

ago, I remember

clearly I could

smell the rain

VJ’s Weekly Challenge #110 – smell

Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge: freight train, longing, and nine – Tuesday, August 25, 2020

-Eugenia

image source – https://www.lovethispic.com/image/108290/candles-in-the-rain



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12 replies

  1. Love this one, Eugi. Forceful…and the ending just highlights the ambiance.

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  2. I agree with V.J! She took the words right out of my mouth! 🙂

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  3. A vivid recollection!

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  4. Wow! So vividly described, Eugi. ❤ The roar of thoughts have such immense power to transport us into another time. Perfect gif to meditate on. I’d love that for my computer screen shot.

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