triumph
changes nearby
bygone makes way for now
answers purpose questions
reasons brewing
success
#TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 210 #SYNONYMSONLY
words – past and present
using Badger’s Hexastich form
- a poem in 6 lines.
- syllabic, 2-4-6-6-4-2.
- unrhymed, optional rising and falling end-words
-Eugi
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Moonwashed Musings 
“Begone makes way for now” PROFOUND!
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Thank you!
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Powerfully penned to another new poetry form\1 Well done! 🙂 ❤
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Thank you, Deborah!
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I like the 3rd line–“bygone” really doesn’t have much choice but to make way for “now” 🙂
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Thank you, Rene!
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Welcome.
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This is beautifully done Eugenia
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 😉
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“answers purpose questions”…very profound, Eugenia.
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
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Reblogged this on Fae Corps Inc.
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Yep – liked this … 🤗
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Thank you! 😊
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Your piece reminds me of the current political climate (at least in the US).
The present is going gung-ho, while the past that shouldn’t be forgotten, still brews –
depending on who is looking, with or without success.
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Yep! It definitely depends on whos looking and listening, and who will be responsible for their actions. Thank you for commenting.
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Franci, what a fabulous message. I like the brevity of this form. With fewer syllables, we have to find the perfect word. You certainly did! ❤
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Thank you so much, Colleen! I’m so glad you enjoyed it! ❤️
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Excellent poem! ❤️
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❤️
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Amazing writings. loved it❤️😊
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Thank you so much! 😊
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