society’s lull before the storm
its languished attempts
table tranquility
the world yawns as
the able bodied
forget their game
confessions flee
the sunken ship
before the wreck
let the truth be known
the storm is destined to pass
Reena’s Xploration Challenge #202
Let’s play around with words a little today. Yeah, we do it everyday, but let this word play be a word game.
Unforgettable
One can extract forget, table or able from this word.
I give you three more
- Languish
- Shipwreck
- Customer
You can even change the order of alphabets (like ‘peck’ from shipwreck, or ‘route’ from customer).
-Eugi
Beautiful.
Have a fabulous day and weekend, Eugenia. ♥
Thank you, Sandee! Wishing you a fabulous weekend!
Oh… that’s fun taking words from words!
Well done.
Thank you, Jules!
The imagery, the visual format and the spirit of the piece is all beyond Excellent. I have no words.
“Confessions flee the sunken ship, before the wreck”
Thank you so much, Reena! I am thrilled you enjoyed it!
Well done Eugenia.
Thank you, Sadje!
You’re welcome
Clever and thoughtful, Eugi. Enjoyed this!
pax,
dora
Thank you, Dora!
You’re welcome!
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Perspectives ..by Eugenia
Thank you for sharing, Reena!
There’s always spectacular imagery in your poems. 🙂
Wow! Thank you for the lovely comment, Deb! You made my day! 🤩
A thought, meaningful poem that reads well. The shape of the poem is visually appealing, too. <3 All the best, Eugenia!
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Cheryl! 😊Stay safe!
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I keep having to reread it to discover the layers of meaning within it. A lovely composition that steers my thoughts in many directions. Well done, Eugenia!
Thank you so much, Susi! What a lovely comment. 😊
You’re welcome, Eugenia! Thanks again for sharing it. 🙂