
thoughts mingle in spite of inadequacy of interpretation
A Monoku is a type of poem which is made up of a single horizontal line. Traditionally considered as a haiku writing, it is currently accepted as a variant of the haiku form of poetry. Monoku emerged as an independent style of poetry in the 1970s.
A haiku in a single horizontal line.
Unlike the Haiku which is made up of three outlines with a total of seventeen syllables, Monoku features a single line consisting of seventeen syllables or even fewer.
It contains a pause brought about by speech rhythm with slight or no punctuation. The first letter should not be capitalized – but instead written in lower case.
-Eugi
Image by strikers from Pixabay
*republished
Wow another new format .. I’ll give it a go Eugenia ..
“the dawn’s misty clouds settled upon the dry sunburnt valley below”
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It’s a fun form isn’t it? Thank you for trying it out and well done!
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It felt a bit weird writing 17 syllables across in one line ..😄🌏
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Yes, I agree!
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There are so many poem forms and most I have never heard of.
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I haven’t heard of many of them, Patricia. I liked this one because some of the shorter forms of poetry are more challenging.
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Ah, a new form of poetry
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Yep, and I found many forms I hadn’t heard of on PoetrySoup. I enjoy new challenges.
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How nice.
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I am unlikely to try this, but it is good to see that Ivor has given it a go
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What a great line. It makes me think, read it again and think some more. I will give this form a try. Thanks and happy Sunday.
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Thank you, Amy! Happy Sunday!
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…and maybe because of it… though provoking
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Yes, and challenging.
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Ah, yes – I’ve done a few of these. Always good to work in a syllable counter when attempting 😉
Nice summary of ‘today’. Perhaps a tad sad though.
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Thank you, Jules. 😉
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(PS.. The ‘You’ve Replied is back… Not sure about the other things that vanished.)
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(Odd… perhaps only for the first reply to somethting… but not to one I just sent to you – and the replies still don’t show up in the WP Dash Comments… I really wish that a) they’d stop messing around and b) at least tell us when they do.)
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I agree, Jules. I believe when WP releases new versions the glitches happen. I read where the 6.0 version will becoming out sometime this year. Yikes! The last version made a mess out of my blog, Eclectic Brew. Anytime I used the quote feature in my posts, the font was huge and I had to go back and fix them. A few other bloggers complained of the same thing.
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Oy! I wish WP would make the changes choices. That way we could choose to be ‘upgraded’ or just leave things be – the way we are used to them.
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Thank you, Rory!
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Wee nevurr herd of a Monoku an wee are amazed!
Yoress iss furry xcellent Miss Eugi!
~~head rubss~~ BellaDahrma~~ an ((hugss)) BellaSita Mum
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It’s new to me too, BellaDharma and BellaSita! I am glad you liked it! 🥰
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monoku should speak volumess an touch a person’ss soul
What due you think Miss Eugi?? BellaSita Mum an mee werked on this twogether…..
Just fore YOU! ❤ ❤
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Purrfection, BellaDharma and BellaSita. I love it! 🥰😻
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Many THANX Miss Eugi!! You REELLY innspire mee an BellaSita Mum ALOT!
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🥰 😘😻
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Beautiful lines and image 💜✍
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Thank you! ❤️
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Ah, I can imagine those multitude of thoughts looking at that sky! Lovely, Eugenia!
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Thank you, Susi!
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You’re welcome, Eugenia! 🙂
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