
once a paradise
moonlit nights and sunny days
answer is in the tempest
why uninvited spirits
shape-shifted to trodden sand
Reena’s Xploration Challenge #233
-Eugi
Poetry inspired by nature
once a paradise
moonlit nights and sunny days
answer is in the tempest
why uninvited spirits
shape-shifted to trodden sand
Reena’s Xploration Challenge #233
-Eugi
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Ahh … eventually
The sands of time
Will bury mankind
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Yes, I agree, Ivor, if we don’t bury ourselves first.
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Ah… reminds me of the midwest ‘Dust bowl’ Days…
But we know why that happened. They took too much ground cover for farms.
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I can’t imagine what those dust storms must have been like. I’m sure the extensive draught and farming methods back then didn’t help.
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The show I watch, said at the time there wasn’t anyway of keeping the sand out of their homes…It was very difficult time.
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With such, vivid, and, beautiful, imagery…
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Thank you very much!
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Very apt take Eugenia
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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Well done, great imagery and soul in your poem. Great picture as well!!
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Thank you for your very kind comment.
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Nothing (absolutely) lasts for ever, Eugie!
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So true, Svein.
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‘shape-shifted’ is perfect
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Thank you, Derrick.
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why uninvited spirits
shape-shifted to trodden sand
Wonderfully expressed …
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Thank you so much!
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I like the thought of those uninvited spirits shapeshifting to sand.
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Thank you, Frank! If only it were that easy to rid ourselves of the uninvited.
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Beautiful. Brings all kinds of thoughts to mind.
Have a fabulous day and weekend, Eugenia. ♥
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Thank you, Sandee!
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Sharp an vivid imagery Miss Eugi….
BellaSita Mum sayss shee missess her place back inn Hammytown..it was her Sanctuary….it was allmost burned to THE ground 6 timess……alof of ashess…not unlike sand rite???
purrss BellaDharma an {{huggiess}} BellaSita Mum
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Thank you, BellaDharma and BellaSita Mum. Wow, that’s scary and sad about your place in Hammytown!! 😿🙀
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I could read this over and over again. Wonderfully penned, Eugenia!
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Thank you so much, Susi!
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You’re very welcome, Eugenia! 🙂
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