
life’s painful pulse
beats to its own drum
to which many succumb
when peace seldom gathers
ourself becomes fraught
languished by our thoughts
the depths of despair
a boundless sea of tears
provoked by our fears
sadness in the past
blissful peace for spirits loved
ocean flows silent
murmurs bring life to the shore
we smile at the sun
What do you see # 147, August 15, 2022

-Eugi
featured image – Pixabay
Image credit; Stromseeker @ Unsplash
Powerful and beautifully crafted
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Thank you so much, Benjamin!
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Welcome, Eugenia.
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That sentiment is rather more prevalent today I think which is sad.
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Excellent we are often our own worst enemies by allowing our thoughts to run in rivers of fear.. ❤
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You hit the nail on the head, Sue!
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Lovely writing, love the smile at the sun line, it ties the poem up beautifully for me. 💖🙏
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Thank you so much! 💖
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Beautiful photo, touching words. For me the ocean washes away my fears and sadness and brings me joy! …and I smile at the sun! 🌞
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Thank you so much, Lisa! 💖
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Getting mired in our fearful thoughts and apprehension clip our wings. Beautiful poem Eugenia. Thanks for joining in
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Thank you so much, Sadje! 💖
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You’re most welcome
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Lovely!
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Thank you!
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How beautifully affecting!
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Thank you, Cindy!
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This captures the harsh power of the picture
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Thank you, Derrick.
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Excellent
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Thank you!
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Very powerful, the imagery is superb
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Thank you, Deb!
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Wow such a beautiful take Eugie 💖
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The rhythm of your words matches the watery swell. Excellent
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Thank you, VJ!
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Welcome!
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There’s just something about the ocean—I don’t know what—that calms and lightens the spirit. It certainly does mine.
Lovely, poignant words artfully arranged. Bravo, Eugi. 👏👏👏💕
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I used to live by the ocean and loved the sound of waves coming ashore. Even the salt air was calming. Thank you and I am glad your enjoyed the poem, July. 💖
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I don’t live by the ocean, but for many years, have vacationed there…right on the beach. Someday, I may move there—permanently.
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I home your dreaams come true! 💕
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Thank you. 💕😊
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Powerful and exciting! ❤️😇
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Thank you! 🤩
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Beautiful 🧡✍
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Thank you! 💛
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(Jules)
Emotions can often be as if we ride rollercoasters…
Nature can teach us many things… the sea can be rough, but also calm.
(I waited to visit this prompted piece since I hadn’t written to it yet – but my post for this prompt is up now.)
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Lovely comment, Jules. I agree completely.
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