
autumn
everywhere grey
tea brews yonder
Poetry form – Hay(na)ku
In a traditional Hay(na)ku, there are:
- A tercet: 3 lines.
- A total of 6 words: 1 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 3 in the third line.
- There is no restriction on syllables or stressed or rhymes.
Variations:
- In the ‘reverse’ haynaku, the longest line is placed first and the shortest last. The total is still 6 words: 3 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 1 in the third line.
- Multiple hay(na)ku can be chained to form a longer poem.
- See the anthology for more variations.
-Eugi
I love it. A beautiful feeling shared in a lovely poem Eugenia.
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Thank you, Suzette!
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definitely ready for tea weather here
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We are too! Fall is our favorite time of the year.
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A perfect combination
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Thank you, Derrick.
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Exquisite with the graphic. Lovely!
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Thank you, Nancy!
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Ah… more tea/tear sky today (here).
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Rain has come your way?
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Yes, again… I don’t mind though. I like rain.
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apawss apawss
You did grate Miss Eugi 🙂
purrss BellaDharma an ❤ BellaSita Mum
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Thank you, BellaDharma and BellaSita Mum! 😻
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Lovely
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Thank you!
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Oh I love these!! I have to give this one a try. Loved your poem!
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Thank you!
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For me, it’s hot chocolate. I am waiting for cooler weather rather impatiently.
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Thank you, Patricia! Yes, the cooler weather is welcome anytime at our place.
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Eugi, this lovely post makes me look forward to autumn. 🙂 Already the temperatures are moderating here, a welcome change. ❤
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Our temps are very pleasant, as well, Cheryl. I love this time of the year. 💕
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ai love it and we just had a wonderful dump of rain yesterday just in time for the wedding and I cut all the pompous grass just in the nick of time before it rained. 🙏🏼💗
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Seems like you are a roll, Cindy. I hope all goes well with the wedding.
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