
hells bells!
who do we ask
who’s up to task
the ungathered rise
to the final burden
common sense sparse
yet the crows caw
coz they know all
let’s pretend
indifference not the end
own your beliefs
or forever bear the heat
Reena’s Xploration Challenge #274
Prompt – Being in charge of hell….
-Eugenia
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Great take Eugenia
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Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re welcome
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a lovely take, Eugenia. 🤍
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Thank you, Destiny.
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most welcome
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Hells Bells indeed dear Eugenia, The crows may craw… But the Cock crows the Morn.. Loved your muse Eugenia and Image… All things are set for the final count-down.. ❤
Much love xx ❤
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Thank you so much, Sue! Hugs! 💖
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💖💖💖
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who do we ask
who’s up to task
the ungathered rise
to the final burden
I loved the use of ‘final burden’. There’s so much more to it.
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Thank you so much, Reena!
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Like the new look!
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Thank you, Cheryl! How nice of you to say.
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Wonderful , Eugenia. Truly enjoyed.💕
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Thank you, Grace!
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You are so welcome 💕
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Love the challenge this poem raises and the way the title creates a sense of empowerment! ❤
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Thank you, Layla.
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I like this very much, Eugi! Short, terse sentences expressing urgency.
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Thank you, Punam.
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A powerful and empowering poem, Eugi. ❤ We must accept responsibility for our actions, for we will bear the consequences.
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Thank you, Cheryl!
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Hello, Eugenia!
Your words have struck a chord within me. The sense of urgency and the overwhelming feeling of uncertainty in your poem are palpable. It’s as if you’re echoing my own inner thoughts and feelings about the world around me.
The lines, “who do we ask, who’s up to the task?” resonate with me deeply. It seems like we are constantly searching for answers, yet no one seems to have them. Your words encourage us to look within ourselves, to “own our beliefs,” and not succumb to indifference.
Your use of metaphor is also striking. The crows who “know all” represent the idea that there may be those who hold the answers, but they may not be the ones we expect. It’s a reminder to keep an open mind and be willing to look beyond our preconceived notions.
Overall, your poem has left me with a sense of introspection and a desire to take ownership of my beliefs and actions. Thank you for sharing your words with all of us. 👍👏👌😊
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Thank you, Pankaj.
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A powerful poetic statement
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Thank you, Derrick.
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This reminds me of a joke…
An Engineer ends up in the wrong place…
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😅 Good one.
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🙂
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Nicee
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Thank you, Saania.
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Beautiful.🖤✍🏾
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Thank you, Jude.
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My pleasure.
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Eugenia,
I have grown to hate the catch phrase, “I’ve/You’ve got this”, especially when it’s obvious one doesn’t have it at all like on game shows which is frequent by chance. lol That all being said, your muse is nice and always on spot for the chalenge.
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I agree, Cathy – another overused and anoying catch phrase, indeed, And thank you.
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Brilliant write on the prompt! It raises questions and urges us to look inside
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Thank you very much, Sangeetha.
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