transcending
beyond existence
his ashes embraced
Hay(na)ku
A tercet: 3 lines.
A total of 6 words: 1 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 3 in the third line.
There is no restriction on syllables or stressed or rhymes.
Variations:
In the ‘reverse’ haynaku, the longest line is placed first and the shortest last. The total is still 6 words: 3 in the first line, 2 in the second line, and 1 in the third line.
Multiple hay(na)ku can be chained to form a longer poem.
-Eugi
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Lovely ❤️
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Thank you.
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Lovely.
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Thank you, Sadje.
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Always a pleasure
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A fine analogy with the photograph
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Thank you, Derrick.
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Splendid.
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Thank you, Misky.
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Touching poem, so well written.
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Thank you, Pooja.
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My pleasure.
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Touching. Works so well with this form.
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Thank you, Debi.
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Mee-yow wow what a poe-em Miss Eugi! You gotted BellaSita an mee thinkin of her hubby Kevin….so wee coe-wrote this Hay(na)ku inn his memoree……here wee go:
“drifting
Kevin’ss ashess
flying free now”
written an copyrited by BellaDharma an BellaSita Mum 2023
nose rubss BellaDharma an ((hugss)) BellaSita Mum
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💖💖Beautifully heartfelt and touching!😻😻
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It just flowed outta BellaSita am meeself Miss Eugi! Thanx fore comin to mee Poe-etry Nook an supportin mee….
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Well done. XO
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Thank you, Ellen.
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love Eugi and the picture is a perfect match! 💗
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Thank you, Cindy! 💖
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welcome my friedn! 💞
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Another excellent interpretation 🙂
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Thank you so much, Sue! 💖
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💖
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…by the gulf in which they were tossed…. (my father).sigh
I just saw in the paper that there is a company that will solidifiy ones ashes into an egg shape… I think I’d rather just go with the wind.
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💖sigh…
Relating to your second comment – an egg, really! I’d rather just go with the wind too.
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After donations and science has its’ go round… then ashes. sigh
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