
rested bliss short-lived
no rationale a bullet
hollow promises
and sleepy-head attitudes
shatter common sense
to thin silence
Reena’s Xploration Challenge #280

thin silence
rested, sleepy, hollow
-Eugi
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chocolate and salt yes
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Chocolate – yes. Salt – ? 🤨
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Thanks for joining in today.
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Thank you for the great prompt and my pleasure.
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You’re welcome
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You always come up with the right phrase for these poetic prompts. I’m not sure what a sleep-head attitude behaves like unless it’s total state of grogginess that can either render one in agreement or argumentative. If that’s what you were going for then I certain can relate. Nice job!
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Yep, you nailed it, Cathy. Thank you for commenting.
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Yay me! 😀
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You have produced an intriguing poem with these prompt words and the prism-shattering image
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Thank you, Derrick. Attempting to blend several prompts is fun and can produce some fascinating poems.
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A fascinating poem!
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A fascinating poem!
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Thank you, Misky. Attempting to blend several prompts provokes a lot of creative thinking.
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I love your new layout. The poetry is gorgeous!
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Thank you, Nicole. I changed themes and thank you for noticing.
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Great poem, really enjoyed it.
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Thank you so much, Pooja!
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My pleasure!
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Poignant image your words create
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Thank you, VJ.
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Even after the ‘Elections’ your verse reminds me of the broken promises of politcs.
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Broken promises after elections seem to happening more and more, unfortunately.
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And we hear about them quicker because of supposed ‘watchdogs’ – who I believe have their own agnedas.
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Wow Eugie this sounds to so relatable to life these days! 😟. Well penned!!😎
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Thank you, Cindy!
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Excellent take my friend with so many prompts integrated in your poem. 👌🏼
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Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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Colourful thoughts emerging from the cracks Eugenia …
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Thank you, Ivor.
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Wonderful use of the prompts. You are quite the poet.
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Thank you very much, Patricia.
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Well done. XO
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shatter common sense
to thin silence
Brilliant line!
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Thank you, Reena!
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Thank you, Ellen.
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Wow!
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Thank you! 😊
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Loving the crisp and precise wording of this poem that evokes lovely imagery! ❤
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Thank you, Layla! 🌞
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A poignant poem, Eugi! Beautiful writing! ❤
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Thank you, Cheryl! 🌞
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Well penned lines
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Thank you.
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Your catchy short phrases are always on point Eugi❤️
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Thank you so much, Mich! 💖
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